Over at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, this week’s music challenge is to base a write on this song:
Meanwhile, the Midweek Motif at Poets United is asking these questions:
“How do we view the image of our body? Do we see it with the eye of the media / advertisement / anyone apart from our own self or is it I am seeing my own body?”
Considering these two intriguing prompts side-by-side, I arrive… here:
When I hit my bottom, my mama said, boy, God will bring you to your knees
And if you still don’t get it, he’ll put you on your back, so listen to Him please
Well she sent me her own bible, with the book of Job marked, and I
Lord I tried to read it I tried
But if the bible’s the word, the word don’t speak to me
And I put it by the wayside
It just may be I’m gonna go down
Go down in the end
I won’t get down on my prayer bones
Still a simple prayer I’ll send:
God don’t give me the rope to hang myself
Mercy!
Give me half a chance
Let me find something solid under my feet
Don’t make me do the air dance
And my body looks at itself in the mirror
And my body sees itself through His eyes
And it’s a body built of sloth and gluttony
Yet the soul within it cries
Mercy!
All my life, I have been kind
Only one I’ve hurt’s myself
With my excesses and gambling
To the neglect of my health
I admit it all; I don’t want to fall
Oh to fall all the way
I’m sorry
Please swing down, Maker, swoop me up
Have mercy on me I pray
This is so moving and beautiful! Love the prayerful lines. We feel grateful to Time when words from within flow like this. A wonderful poem.
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This is awesome. I love the poetry form and the dialect used to tell this story based on the Kaleo song. Thanks for participating!
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