Listen, neighbor! For my neighbor you are
Wherever in this so small world you dwell
And especially you listen, Mr. Frost
Your whisp’ring caves so close to my bound’ry
I am doing my best to hibernate
Yet I hear your glitt’ring breath on the air
Bidding welcome to knock under your wreath
And to partake in the wealth of your winter feast
Your loud invitation is rejected!
I much prefer the silence of my home
And chasing mirage buffets in my dreams…
Hear my words again lest they falter’d first:
Silence, neighbor! I am hibernating.
Mending Wall
by ROBERT FROST
Something there is that doesn’t love a wall,
That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it,
And spills the upper boulders in the sun;
And makes gaps even two can pass abreast.
The work of hunters is another thing:
I have come after them and made repair
Where they have left not one stone on a stone,
But they would have the rabbit out of hiding,
To please the yelping dogs. The gaps I mean,
No one has seen them made or heard them made,
But at spring mending-time we find them there.
I let my neighbour know beyond the hill;
And on a day we meet to walk the line
And set the wall between us once again.
We keep the wall between us as we go.
To each the boulders that have fallen to each.
And some are loaves and some so nearly balls
We have to use a spell to make them balance:
“Stay where you are until our backs are turned!”
We wear our fingers rough with handling them.
Oh, just another kind of out-door game,
One on a side. It comes to little more:
There where it is we do not need the wall:
He is all pine and I am apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.
He only says, “Good fences make good neighbours.”
Spring is the mischief in me, and I wonder
If I could put a notion in his head:
“Why do they make good neighbours? Isn’t it
Where there are cows? But here there are no cows.
Before I built a wall I’d ask to know
What I was walling in or walling out,
And to whom I was like to give offence.
Something there is that doesn’t love a wall,
That wants it down.” I could say “Elves” to him,
But it’s not elves exactly, and I’d rather
He said it for himself. I see him there
Bringing a stone grasped firmly by the top
In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed.
He moves in darkness as it seems to me,
Not of woods only and the shade of trees.
He will not go behind his father’s saying,
And he likes having thought of it so well
He says again, “Good fences make good neighbours.”
As per usual, I have taken from multiple prompts/challenges/suggestions in creating this post. This time more of them than per usual. The Sunday Writing Prompt at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie is to write a rant, a tantrum… Meanwhile, the Just Jot it January prompt for today is ‘silence’. Both dVerse Poets Pub and Imaginary Garden with Real Toads are calling for ‘response poems’ which speak to other poems. Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt includes the photo I’ve featured here as well as the word ‘boundary’. And finally (finally) the 12 words for Sunday’s Whirligig coming from “In the Cold Country” by Barbara Howes are: “glittering, welcome, wreath, frost, whispering, hibernate, caves, rejected, breath, mirage, under, and falter.”
…All of which culminates in me telling you to shush it. Haha! Whatever you do, don’t take me at my word. Repeat: Do not shush it. Keep the words coming. I am, in point of fact, not hibernating. Quite to the contrary, I am wide awake and knocking at your door.
A great combination
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No way we can play tennis with ghosts without fearing the serve of our opponents — we are bound to our originals and the shadow of influence is chilling! Glad someone got around to this aspect of the challenge. What is it to occupy territory so close to someone like Robert Frost? How to distinguish ourselves, as we did from our parents? For me, this poem was richest exploring what that means. “Your loud invitation is rejected! / I much prefer the silence of my home / And chasing mirage buffets in my dreams…” is a little like shouting “get behind me, Satan!” We all need to if we’re going to write an original lick of our own. Thanks for joining in.
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Ha, that’s telling him. This was fun to read – and made me think that perhaps the speaker is a bear!
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I liked your response to Frost! A poet can only hibernate so long. Smiles!!
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I prefer the silence of my home, too………..hibernating. i really enjoyed your voice in this.
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I do love to hibernate, but I know I must crawl out of the cave at times and world walk. Great response to Frost and prompt.
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