At the risk of playing Captain Obvious here, I want to explore a thought.
It seems to me sometimes… that the choices I’m constantly making as I write… are all based on one presumption: I presume that what I’m writing will be read.
Why else would it matter what words I choose or how I decide to string them together?
Every word choice, every choice involving grammar, sentence structure, punctuation… all of these choices are made with the desired outcome of effective communication.
I want what I’m writing to be comprehensible. I want it to be accessible.
Let me get to the point.
If I were to abandon the concept of being read, what would my writing be like?
Right now, for example, I am choosing not to write in long, wordy sentences, in fat chunky paragraphs, like a textbook.
Maybe my answer lies partially therein. If I knew that this would not be read by anyone but me, I would probably tend to create more dense prose…
…Which speaks to my assumptions about who may read this.
I’m assuming that if I wrote like a textbook, most of my readers’ eyes would glaze over (like mine tend to do when I read textbooks), and that they would soon leave off reading this and go on to something else, or would find themselves at the bottom of the post without much memory of what they had read.
If I abandoned the notion of a readership, I might find myself choosing bigger words.
Instead of ‘choosing bigger words’ for example, I might write ‘applying less common terminology with a higher degree of specificity’. No really. I like to write like that.
But I was taught in a journalism class to write to the eighth-grade comprehension level.
And I know what it feels like to get bogged down in – or exasperated by – other writers’… shall we say… flourishes.
It’s funny, isn’t it, that my idea of ‘writing with abandon’ is to be more textbookish?
Seems like most people might think of writing with abandon as exposing secret fears or desires… writing luridly, floridly, recklessly, sexily…
Oh well. I am a closet academic.
So that’s it for now I guess. Just wanted to ponder ‘out loud’ about this a bit.
If you have any thoughts about this line of thinking, please comment!
Great post 👍🏼
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Well firstly thanks Dan for adding your thoughts on Abandonment to this week’s Tale weaver. I think we ask those questions everytime we write on our blog, will anyone read it. From my experience bloggers have a limited attention span so writing too much is often not a good idea, but sometimes what you write needs a lot of words.
The other trap I’ve found is thinking what you’ve written is your best contribution to the literary world and having no one read it. The next time you write what you think is an ordinary post and people seem to line up to tell you how good it is. The mystery of blogging!!!
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This is the first of your posts I’ve seen, but if it’s any indication of your typical style, your natural inclination damn near mirrors mine. I won’t presume to offer advice, but I’m happy to share my own blogging philosophy. I blog for myself, not for anyone else. I write what I want, when i want, the way I want and offer no apologies. If no one else likes what I post, so be it. If after writing I don’t like what I’ve written, I scrap it. But if I’m happy with what I’ve produced, I don’t care what anyone else thinks about it.
Good luck.
Denny
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As ‘Writers’ we choose to abandon those concepts which we believe will hinder our experiences. We want others to feel the depth of our suffering or the heights of our joy. Sometimes our own education gets in the way… all those rules for writing.
I am at a loss with most rules as I was taught to express myself. Though I do try to write clearly, if I break a rule I am not likely to know it. I write for sound bites. Most things ring true because not only do they come from my own life, but they can fit into the puzzle of others lives.
And all we can do as Writers is to breath… because writing is breathing. It is our differences that draw us to each other as well as our similarities. 🙂
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kaykuala
Seems like most people might think
of writing with abandon as exposing
secret fears or desires… writing luridly,
floridly, recklessly, sexily
In a way it is true. but it is more than just that. It is the passion for it perhaps!
Hank
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