i.
smokebreak!
i rush out back
fish pack from front pocket
shake one out, lip it, get it lit
and drag
backyard
dandelions gone to seed, gray
as my exhalations
many wishes
unmade
…
ii.
mold me
bewitch my mind
with your grim poetry
adrip with morbid metaphor
and lies
until
madden’d by your devious lines
fully under the spell
of Bukowski
i writhe
…
(thx Colleen)
Wow! These double mirror cinquains are fabulous. I love when poets write about everyday life. There’s poetry in everything. Well done!! ❤
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Brilliant!
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