mealtime
tasty, hearty
burning, taking, taxing
surplus unto surfeit, surcease
repast
doldrums
gainless, adrift
dreading, stewing, ruing
a paucity of potency
impasse
stirring
nascent, ginger
starting, swelling, broaching
realization of resource
onset
effort
focused, willful
feeding, guiding, coaxing
bringing results into being
foray
harvest
joyous, rightful
choosing, reaching, plucking
fair fruits of labor’s providence
rewards
(thx to Colleen)
What a fabulous presentation! That last stanza really makes this Crown Cinquain sing. Don’t you love this form? Such fun. You did fabulously! ❤
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Why thank you Colleen. Yes, I love how a form can wick words and meaning right up and out of you… when I set out to write this time, I had no idea where it would go, but the form showed me the way.
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Well done! I enjoyed this poem! ☺️
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A lovely form of poetry. Enjoyed the rhythm you created.
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Thx Helene.
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The ebb and flow of the words is wonderful. Plus it makes a beautiful shape! (K)
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Well I’ll be!
https://colleenchesebro.com/2018/09/24/colleens-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-recap-no-102-energy-vigor-synonymsonly/
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Lovely crown cinquain, Dan!
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Thanks much Vashti
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