free
to choose
any course
i choose freedom
to begin again
and am snared in a loop
always at the starting point
blind to all opportunities
except the option to remain free
thus do i go generally nowhere
but nature knows no actual stasis
life consists of perpetual motion
so though i am stuck at square one
still many things come to pass
like today i woke up
that happened to me
another day
caught in this
freedom
loop
(cheers Colleen)
Excellent thoughts, Dan. I really love this form. What did you think?
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The form I very much enjoy. This poem I think is a bit too clever to be much good. lol
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LOL! That’s funny. I agree. The Etheree form is definitely a keeper. 😀
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I too love the Etheree form. You wrote a wise poem.
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Even if you think you are going nowhere, the world takes you with it…well said. (K)
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Hello Dan! I enjoyed your double Etheree. 🙂
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